Monday 5 September 2011

Chapter Four:- The Case Is Closed

and so i made my way to the door, damn i thought i'd never get through. and my god just look at how much sand and dust there is here, not surprised that Corneal didn't pass out from it all, most of it went up into my eyes and nose, uhhh, not a great feeling i can tell you that, but anyway we made our way into the pyramid, and it was pretty big, kinda like the tardis but, not blue, i'm not complaining though there is plenty of stuff in here to discover, and Jinkies, two rooms, so what happens next? well me and Corneal knocked our heads together, not literately but i am sure you know what i mean, so i took the left room while Corneal took the right

Corneal thought i was going insane, he thought i might kill myself, pfft don't be stupid i am a full grown man, well i am 19 years old, heh still a teenager, but i know what i am doing, i think. and so anyway we went our separate ways, the first thing that caught my eye was another pile of rubble oh, Minecraft how i love you!

*Moments Later*

wait...what the? another room? and stairs? wow by jingo! i am so gonna see what's down here! well this stuff can come in handy, once i collected stuff from that area i found another staircase and hmm, money might pay off my debt from the slinky, heh everyone is happy!

*CREEEEEEEEKK*


wait what the hell was that? can't be this...this..thing, can it? i wonder what's inside it?
O__O Hello? oh good nothing...phew, thought i was gonna be a goner then, hmm i wonder what this little bit of rubble leads me too?


*Meanwhile Corneal was doing some searching for himself*

Hmm, i wonder what's down here, i can feel some sort of button type thing, i wonder what it does. "and just at the second Corneal heard stone rumbling and crumbling, he turned around and saw a stair case forming, where could this lead him he thought, he didn't waste any time and just rushed down the stairs

Well, sighed Corneal, there isn't much down here is there? but to his surprise something was sparkling something that couldn't be ignored. Corneal's eye widen (thats if he had any) to the gold mystic thing he held in his hands, it started to speak to him, but at that point Corneal thought he was going insane so he listened again.

When all of a sudden he heard a confused yelp from Foxtura

CORNEAL!? i thought you was over there or something, how did i end up here? why do i hear funny voices? "Calm down Ace! this golden nugget is trying to tell me something. Golden Nugget? said a puzzled chap, golden nuggets are delicious! add a bit of milk and you have a fantastic breakfast! maybe add some cheerios too hmm nomnomnom...

then from out of the blue Ace's conversation was cut off the golden nugget was talking

SILENCE! DO YOU WISH TO SEEK THE TRUTH?

Ace poked his nose into the golden nugget and said with a cheeky tone, "Yarp  you tasty little thang you ;)

SHUT UP! SO YOU SEEK THE TRUTH OF THE MISSING CHEERIOS, MANY YEARS AGO THIS  TEMPLE....

I thought this was a pyramid interrupted Ace

DOES THIS KID SHUT UP?  THIS TEMPLE BELONGS TO FIKRY AMEEN ONCE EVERY BLUE MOON  HE TURNS ON HIS CAPTAIN CRUNCH MACHINE AND BEEMS ALL OF THE CHEERIOS IN THE LAND AWAY TO A FAR OUT PLANET

How can he do such a thing? you must tell us where this man is, we need to track him down...

then all of a sudden the golden nugget blasted out a bright white light, brighter than its golden glow. Once the  white light cleared Ace and Corneal found themselves out side a home, Corneal caught his eye on the name on the wall, it was the Ameen residents, the pair walked to the door and pressed the doorbell.

Ace, i hope our Arabic is good enough.

   
Shush! someone is coming! make sure you put your best accent on! 

*A young woman walked outside to greet them, Ace...got confused on what language he was about to speak, the young woman shook his hand and said

مرحبا يا سيدي ، كيف يمكنني مساعدتك؟
(Hello Sir, how can i help you?)

Hallo liebe jeune femme
(Hello dear young woman)

all of a sudden Ace felt a sharp pain from the back of his head, Corneal just slapped him, trying to knock some sense, Corneal took over avoiding any mess ups

نعم، آسف يا صديقي حول هنا يحصل الخلط هو مع بعض اللغات آمل كنت لا تمانع
(yes, sorry about my friend here, he gets confused with some languages i hope you don't mind)

لا تقلق أي ضرر! فكيف يمكنني مساعدتك اثنين؟
(don't worry no harm done! So how can i help you two?)

آه، نعم نحن نبحث عن امين السيد، ولقد قال انه يعيش هنا.
(Ah, yes we are looking for a Mr Ameen, we have been told he lives here.)

نعم يفعل، فهو زوجي وأعطي لك الحصول عليه، لماذا لا تأتي في؟
(Yes he does, he is my husband, i shall get him for you, why not come in? )

so Ace and Corneal made their way into the family home and waited for Mr Ameen. Moments later...

آه أيها السادة، كيف يمكنني مساعدتك؟
(ah gentlemen, how can i help you? )

مرحبا امين السيد، ونحن نقوم من انكلترا Buttonville ونود أن أسألك بضعة أسئلة حول المفقودين تشيريوس
(hello Mr Ameen, we we are from Buttonville England and we would like to ask you a few questions about the missing cheerios )

يا أنت من انكلترا؟ هذا هو لذيذ للتو! أنا فقط مجرد الحب وثقافتك لهجة! لدي شهادة في اللغة الإنجليزية! نعم ولكن ما هي الأسئلة التي لديك بالنسبة لي
(oh you're from England? that is just delicious! i just simply love your culture and accent! i have a degree in English language! But yes what questions do you have for me)


all of a sudden Ace jumped into the conversation, "So! I am afraid we have to take you to our local station Sir and talk there, Please! cried Ameen! i don't want to go to jail! i have a wife and child they need me more than anything else! "Ace put his hand on Ameen's shoulder, we only want answers, now come there are people waking up to empty bowls this morning this needs to be sorted

 
*Authors Note*

i am very sorry for the long wait for chapter four of Ace Foxtura, i have had a very busy summer, when i got busy i wanted to play games and chat, then i got busy again and so the cycle continued i only had a bit of time to write in my chitter chatter blog, also my time was consumed by learning hebrew, so i tried writing a bit more for this chapter and i hope you all like it. Take Care!

Rachel

1 comment:

  1. It was worth the wait...Looks like Ace is closing in on a resolution to this mystery.

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